Opposing Forces edition by aldivan teixeira torres Jillian Kostora da Silva Literature Fiction eBooks
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“Opposing forces is the first book of the series "The Seer" with the main characters being the double dynamic, the Seer and his inseparable adventure partner, Renato. In this first volume, tired of monotony, the Seer proposes to make a trip to a mountain that promises to be sacred, with the hopes of making his dreams come true. After scaling the mountain, he meets a guardian, a being ancient full of wisdom, which promises to help him on his path. Aided by her, he performs three challenges that give him the credentials he needs to enter into the cave of despair, a place where the impossible becomes possible.”
Opposing Forces edition by aldivan teixeira torres Jillian Kostora da Silva Literature Fiction eBooks
I so wish that I could give this book more than 2 stars but the author doesn't seem to know where the book lives on the bookshelf 'cos I asked him which age group it was suitable for and he told me it was suitable for everyone and that it was a book filled with action and adventure.It isn't.
It starts and finishes autobiographically and the author is the main character as well as being written in first person, which is so confusing!
The main character is in his early twenties so it's not suitable for children because the main character is way too old, but it's not mature enough for the adult reader either.
To be fair to the author, there were a few good bits that drew me into the book, but I was hoping that I would be drawn into reading every page.
There were also several places where there was just a single paragraph over several pages... no breaks or paragraphs or anything, just a huge block of text for several pages!!
I'm glad that the author got published 'cos I know only too well how hard that is, but I personally would have put it through several edits and made it more compelling to read... more excitement, more talking between the characters, more paragraphs - the potential is there, it just should have gone through a lot more work to make it better first. Sorry.
The quotation dashes, brackets, and talking to the reader within the book, were so confusing... maybe that's how it's done in the author's country and language, but it really confused me and almost made me want to take notes to see who was talking.
It also talked about Christianity a lot and seemed to associate Paganism with being a devil-worshipping, dark religion which couldn't be further from the truth and I personally found those bits quite offensive!
Parts of it has potential, but it needs a lot of work to get more than 2 stars from me, sorry!
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Opposing Forces edition by aldivan teixeira torres Jillian Kostora da Silva Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
Well written, steady paced, smooth flowing read with twists and turns and unpredictable surprises that kept my attention on the pages. If your looking for an easy read with excitement, you've got it. Thanks for sharing this read with us.
I received an ARC copy for this story.
I so wish that I could give this book more than 2 stars but the author doesn't seem to know where the book lives on the bookshelf 'cos I asked him which age group it was suitable for and he told me it was suitable for everyone and that it was a book filled with action and adventure.
It isn't.
It starts and finishes autobiographically and the author is the main character as well as being written in first person, which is so confusing!
The main character is in his early twenties so it's not suitable for children because the main character is way too old, but it's not mature enough for the adult reader either.
To be fair to the author, there were a few good bits that drew me into the book, but I was hoping that I would be drawn into reading every page.
There were also several places where there was just a single paragraph over several pages... no breaks or paragraphs or anything, just a huge block of text for several pages!!
I'm glad that the author got published 'cos I know only too well how hard that is, but I personally would have put it through several edits and made it more compelling to read... more excitement, more talking between the characters, more paragraphs - the potential is there, it just should have gone through a lot more work to make it better first. Sorry.
The quotation dashes, brackets, and talking to the reader within the book, were so confusing... maybe that's how it's done in the author's country and language, but it really confused me and almost made me want to take notes to see who was talking.
It also talked about Christianity a lot and seemed to associate Paganism with being a devil-worshipping, dark religion which couldn't be further from the truth and I personally found those bits quite offensive!
Parts of it has potential, but it needs a lot of work to get more than 2 stars from me, sorry!
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